Read it as a beautiful verse and forget it. Nothing to hurt or upset anyone. This had been lying in my drafts for a long time. I neither wanted to publish it nor delete it. Pass on to my other new post.
Sleep little one,
Your eyes tightly shut,
Hands clasped,
In God’s little world,
With little heavens like you.
To there, only innocent souls venture.
I dreamt a dream
Drizzy with frenzied happiness,
Though for a brief moment,
But to last a life time.
Holded you briefly,
Kissed you,
Till my heart ached,
Wishing a hundred times,
That how different it would be,
If you were here.
Sleep little one,
Gently snore your pains away,
Till its time for you,
To bubble in me.
24 comments:
It's beautiful and i can still feel the pain in you. Hope you are doing well
Sad and beautiful poem da...
Hey wat can i say.......Lovely words.....u write beautifully....But s it of any help in reducing ur pain...I dont know...
I don't know what to say dear. I am sure God will fulfill your hearts desire soon. wanna read that glad news in this blog da. Till then take care. Hugs. Viki.
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That really hurts...very painful to read...
Wish everything turns out perfect this year...really want to see the happy side of you.
Pls cheer up,
Malar
That poem is so sad, lovely but sad! Wish you all the best for the future, hope everything works out for you !
came here to thank you for connecting with me at this point of time.......you know it means a lot when you can correlate ...
the poem is so sad n yet beautiful , filled with hope too...
keep writing n connecting with people as i am trying to do the same...the gap can never be filled , nobody can replace a person in your life ...we just cherish the memories and find happiness in them...
beautiful.
very beautiful poem, i know someone very dearly who gone through the same pain..you captured the pain very beautifully in the words
nice writing.. u have xecellent skill in writing.
Hey,
Thanks for visiting my blog.. remember hvng commented here many times before :)
Beautiful words there ..Hope God grants u the best soon!
It's beautiful poem and sad feelings....
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its amazing.
Hey monkey it's time for your next post...start scribbling di :)
Happy valentines Day dear
Dear Devsena
I just hopped in here from your comment on a blog friend.
I regret I did not see your blog before...Now I am going to read all one by one ,,,this one is simply superb writing and creation , it pains though
I can enjoy reading your posting , away from kitchen and in the alien city Milano...
Wonderful poem...
What a meaningful poem,hits the right note..very touchy...
Beautifully written. :)
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Why there is not an update? I keep visiting and going like this:(
Award is waiting for you...plz collect it
your baby is waiting to bubble in you... WAITING! Allow the child to come inside you... will you do that? if you are going to keep yourself drowned in your misery, it is going to be difficult.
Understand Devasena? do you understand? I know I am cruel but pls allow your baby to seed inside you... make yourself happy and make your hubby happy too... not too long you are going to have a tiny little baby in your lap, sucking his/her thumb and smiling at you :) love you dear... pls let go of your painful memories!
hi, This is just so touching...
take care
rekha
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