Wednesday, September 9, 2009

You wanna me to write? Eh


Oh what do I write? Nothing strikes me.
The old Well behind my house doesn’t kindle me,
Our back house little boy's peeing like a fountain, doesn't awe me,
The Old man who keeps staring, staring at our window until his eyes bulge out,
Neither does it anger me.

Devoid of emotions,
What Am I to do,
His mom's visits dwindling out nowadays,

Doesn't make me jump and yell with delight.
That brat of a boy, who scratches my new car daily with his cycle,
My hands doesn't twitch to twist his ears red.

Oh What I'm to fill out here,
For you to read,
Or to tell you about the old salwars in my closet I pull down on me effortlessly,

That seams and curves that finally releaved that I have a hip,
Do I brag about that achievement.

Oh What do I write,

Have I been drained of emotions?

9 comments:

Ann said...

Deva..speechless to say,am in same mood..and you made my cheeks wet..what more to say ?

Viji said...

hmmm... what do I say to make you feel better...except that don't alter your clothes yet, for you're going to fill in with in a short period..today is 12th september 2009 and it is 2.30 AM. 13 years from now you are going to complain about your son/daughter, the way I do about my Son :) jus you wait... now go to your guy and enjoy the solitary moments as much as you can coz you will not have the luxury to have it a year or two from now :) at the most romantic moments you will see his/her head raise from sleep calling out for you :D have fun dear!

Viji said...

leaving alone your feel... you writing is just awesome.. keep writing. Hope your next post is little optimistic and pls don't think that I am bereft of feelings...I would love to see you plan your future. I know you and am sure you will.

Gita said...

I will go by what Viji says...try to focus all your thoughts and your flare for writing on something you find interesting di...until you get busy with your kids :)

നമത് വാഴ്വും കാലം said...

Writers block? Just like fever. May give you more than you bargained for. Just wait Devasena:-) Good writing

നമത് വാഴ്വും കാലം said...

Forget to tell you. Keep walking

Kiran said...

Devasena,

That was awesome. I really liked the way you wrote it. And yes,sunshine is not far away. Cheer up :)

My cooking experiments said...

Enjoyed your post.Keep writing.

Malar Gandhi said...

I feel burnt out too sometimes...same boat:)